beautiful story! so sad! really felt bad for caspian

I hope you know.. you just broke my heart, this was so well written... really broke it, hugs!

You made me cry. You're evil, an amazing writer, but fairly evil. Caspian was breath-taking... dramatic,sad and full of hope. The Pevensies were so truly caracterized and their reactions... Gee: amazingly sad.

Wow, in a way this story was totally different from the book, but at the same time there are quite a few similarities in the ending. Great job with this story!

OH wow. This seriously made me cry. I had an awful day, so I was just browsing random fanfiction to read, and this was just so beautifully written that I cried.

That was so sad! I love it.