| Reviews for The White Armor Ball |
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  Anonymousme chapter 4 . 12/3/2018 Oh, I really loved the verses! Where did you get them? And what was Peterkins supposed to sing? Ahh, and this chapter was so... finishing. Fulfilling. Nice work! |
 Sarai chapter 4 . 1/13/2018 awesome |
| Firebreathingmarauder chapter 1 . 4/29/2017 That was so nice. Just wondering how old were all the main characters in this? And what was it that jaer did? |
| trustingHim17 chapter 4 . 2/19/2015 loved this! especially the wassail. i'd only vaguely heard of it, so it was really nice to find a better description and i greatly enjoyed reading it! |
| Tauriel chapter 4 . 11/15/2013 Wassail! Merry Christmas! |
| LiveAndLetRain chapter 4 . 7/10/2013 Beautiful. I haven't read all of your other stories so some of the characters and back stories are unfamiliar but it was still lovely. |
| ElvishKiwis Venerated Ancestor chapter 4 . 6/21/2013 I like this very muchly! Where do you get your ideas from?! The white amour ball is a delightful idea, if not somewhat uncomfortable, and I love Jael's modesty and friendship with the Pevinsies. Is Periadan one of CS Lewis' characters? I gather his sons are yours is that right? You do them so well I really can't tell. I especially like your ebony dryads. They seem very beautiful. I am kind of imagining them like the Ethiopian Pharaoh dynasty of queens. I often wish your stories were illustrated... |
| Heliopause chapter 4 . 7/25/2012 Thank you for this cheerful, happy story! I really enjoyed it! You write such a dense, full Narnia! (and I can see that there must be lots of other stories for me to go chasing through, too - I look forward to them!) |
| MCH chapter 4 . 3/12/2012 This made me smile. I wish I had had an invite - to the ball as I not much good with a sword |
| ArbitraryHandle chapter 4 . 7/23/2011 I think that this is the most joyous depiction of a celebration that I have ever read. |
| sylphides chapter 4 . 1/5/2011 I was just browsing and came across this short story. I loved it! Poor Jaerin. :) Also, I have sung the Wassail Carol in my choir and it was rather fun singing your invented verses to the tune- albeit in the alto melody. You did very well writing clever verses that rhyme and fit the flow of the melody. |
| Anonymous chapter 4 . 5/7/2010 I loved the songs. They're so poetic, and I could hear the melody in my head as I read them. You're great! |
| aniuwolfe chapter 4 . 1/21/2010 I was grinning from ear to ear that entire time. Fantastically adorable work. |
| HarmonyLover chapter 4 . 12/6/2009 Oh, it's certainly Christmas now. I feel it all the way down to my toes. :) HL |
| LadyoftheShield chapter 4 . 8/15/2009 Cute! Peterkins is adorable! |
