I am the first reviewer to be the eighth reviewer? Does that count? XD
Nah, but your story was all sorts of great. I like reading fics when both of them are adults, but this one is pretty good :) (Sorry, I try to refrain from using words like 'awesome' or 'stupendous' or anything else overly hyper and over the top).
She sees only his eyes, his beautiful eyes, and she looks in the mirror and knows she has changed.
That was quite possibly the best sentence in the entire thing.
Keep writing! :)

Wow, that was great! I'll try out that technique sometime, haha! I loved the "word blur" as you called it, it makes the story seem connected and more artistic- does that make sense? Great job!

Oddly glorious.

Very interesting. I was wondering what people might do with these two characters...and this is probably my favorite idea. Nice.

Oh, I just loved this. It's not a pairing I'd ever really considered one way or another, but your writing made me believe. Snape through Petunia's eyes was very interesting, and it was nice to see Lily more objectively, the good and bad. My favorites were the bits about Severus' eyes, and the whole last section was just gorgeous.

Alice/Bellatrix

Part 1: Their romance (must be during Hogwarts years)

Part 2: The end of their romance (must include some reference to Frank)

Part 3: What Bella's thinking while she tortures Alice.

That's my request. The parts can just be seperated by a line or something.

Love this! I've never really read a Petunia/Snape because I've always thought it's a weird pairing, but you made it work.

This story is really interesting. It must have been difficult trying to write it the way you did. I never really cared for this pairing, but you seemed to keep it both in context and in character. Great job.

Aw... I don't get to request... but this is good, I like it. Although I kind of wish I could see what you wrote for the other request I had, too.