Ah it's a shame you didn't finish this. And left it on a cliffhanger haha!

Dear Nico. This story was the first Labyrith fanfiction I have ever read. It set my basis of comparison and it was rather high. Unfortunately, like that time several years ago and now it stays abandoned. And it is really sad. I don't expect that it will be updated someday. I just want you to know that my love to the Labyrinth fanfics started with your creation. Thank You!

Please please update this! This is one of the best pieces of fanfic I've read, and you've captured the characters perfectly! You've a gift of storytelling!

Please update. Please please please please please

I can't wait! Beautifully written! Thank you!

Are you going to update? You’ve done a good job with and it and I would love to see you Perdue my re of this creative fantastical writing. This is not an appropriate ending and sheer toture for those that are a fan of your delicious story.

When will we see what happens!

I realize your probably very busy but please find it in you heart to write at least one more chapter this was by far my FAVORITE read!

I wish you had continued the story, I would have loved to have read how Jareth reacts to Baltus's wish and what he does afterwards. It's going to be hard to read another fan fiction without thinking about this story. I do hope you one day finish it, I was really getting into it. You are a good writer and I would like to read more from you. :)

I hope you continue this...

Dear Author,

If You are alive (which I hope You are), please, update the story.
Do not torture us any longer.

Love this story, would LOVE to see more!

PLEASE, CONTINUE. I'm loving the story!

Please write more! You have a great style and story going! You are a gifted writer!

I love this so far, doing a graye job!