This is an awsome story. I love all of your one-shots and really like the thing you do at the end is most of your Naruto ones. (The "where the light comes to an END, the dark begins" thing.)

I know that you're probably not going to write for Naruto anymore, but please finish Gentleman!

Wow, nice story! o:

You are so close to capturing Itachi's personalities...and his way of looking at life... But it seems his speech is a bit too informative...because he seems like the person to keep things simple and complex...

i don't know that's just me, AWESOME JOB!

-snarky

You write wonderfully.

Depressing but very in character. I guess you're up-to-date in reading the online translations of the manga. I really like your Itachi. He, Kakashi, Neji, and Sakura are my favorite characters...I don't like the fate two of them ended up with!

so beautiful !

great story i liked it

hope you'll write others

Very deep, and emotional, good job!

during my slight hiatus from all things internet related, i realized that i really missed reading stuff like this.

y'know, the really nice oneshots that even if they're sad make you smile.

Oh, that just tore my heart to pieces. He deliberately hurt her so he'd have to let her go. She was still alive because it was never his intention to kill her.

I LOVE ITASAKU! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

Aww. So sad.

I liked this a lot, a lot! :D

Very sad though, we all think of what if's when it comes to Itachi, Hehe! Anyways, fantastic story, I'm favoring it right NOW!

:D

beautiful story!

Oh, man. That was deep. That was real deep.

Great job.

aww.

this is amazing.

but so sad.

I really hope you can add another chapter to this.

the endings too sad.

but still an amazing story.

:)

~jay~