Please make this longer

it was cool i liked it although it would be much better if you make a long story..but very very original...im starting to right and i have some original ideas..if you want hers my sisters email

LOOOOVEEEEE! ITTTT :D

I am loving this story. The ending made me laugh and you are quite the writer. You probably don't remember me though( I star-electric from Deviantart :3)

I think this should be rated more like 'T'...

I was so sure that I'd already said this, but(eh-ehm)

Is it just me, or is Nightwing a little thick in the head? He seriously DIDN'T see through that? Yikes.

Anyway, I was gonna say efore, GREAT!

LATER!

Go Raven and BB fluff!

greatness is the definate word!

Not bad at all for a first story. I read your bio page and I think you are wrong in your claim that you suck at fact, you should write some more, I think you'll suprise yourself at how well you do write.

Hi :D It's me, bbfan77, from Deviant art :D *waves* XD

OH MY GOSH! :D

This was so awesome! :D I absolutely LOVE the storyline

the way you put in a Honeymoon totally made me melt in a good way XD

and I didn't catch any big grammar mistakes... Well... no grammar mistakes at all actually :D

I'd say you've done a fabulous job for your second fan-fic :D

nice work...and you CAN write!

Great story! LOL. Way to fool Robin! Thanks for writing this. God bless!

LMAO AWESOME! Just like what everybody knows what REALLY happened after they would argue

Lol

Cute and believable.

Keep writing. The only way to get better is with experience.

HA-Ha, very clever to pull one over on Nightwing, their leader. :D

This was an enjoyful story and I encouarage you to continue on your writing for future readers and future stories to come. ;)