This is a really sweet dtory. :)

I world never forgive bella or the rest of the of them if
they hide my child form me.

Fucking stupid. Acting like everyone he knows didn't keep his child away from him for six years, and bella is with jacob WHO also is her bf or whatever and guess what? Bet he played daddy with with edwars child.

Fucking stupid, i hate this shit, you have edward acting like shit didn't happen, like a spung fucking college boy, fucking get outta here with that... He's suppose to be more mature? A mature person knows when they have been wronged and don't keep fuckers like bella around, AND AT THE VERY LEAST make said fuckers work for their trust back.

GOODBYE!

FUCKING BULLSHIT.

I'M ANGRY AS FUCK!

SHE DESERVED A FUCKING TONGUE LASHING THAT WOULD MAKE HER BE ON THE FLOOR CRYING LIKE THE PIECE OF SHIT SHE IS FOR DOING THIS.

WTF

I'm sorry but did alice just fuck jasper in under 24 hours of just meeting him?

Taylor Lautner is the perfect Jacob! Everyone else was not so great though.

You wrote me?
Yeah. It wasn't over. It still isn't over.
(Kiss)
Lol I've never actually seen The Notebook, but everyone knows that line. It reminded me of this. Seems like you did it on purpose... (Suspicious glance)

I can't be bribed with Jacob! I really don't like him trying to make time with Edward's girl.

Loved it ))

xxx

Great story!

I like the happy ending!

It's really cool that you could make eveyone happy!

Awww this is nice! :D

3 That was adorable 3 iLoved the whole thing. the plot, i guess you could say? ahahaxD but yeah anyway... i like how you kept the name Renesmee and gave the nickname "Ren" i actually like that better than "Nessie" why? i really do not know... but I do. :]

GREAT STORY ! :D absolutely loved it. 1000 percent ! :D

loll

MY GOSHHH

ITS LIKE THE NOTEBOOK

PLUS MINUTE BITS OF GREESE

LUVVVVVIT