In what fucking world would someone want to read a story in which Edward fucked Tanya cumdumpster Denali? I assume you would also like Bella to help Edward raise Tanyas kid? NO THANK YOU.

hey!

i think that your story is realy good so far and that you should totally keep going with it! if you need an idea then here is one. you don't have to use it, but it is a suggestion. so, my idea is that maybe bella could realy like natalie after spending so much time with her and edward for her book. and then maybe bella could be like the mother that natalie will never have(unless you chose edward to get married to someone other than bella,). then that way bella gets to know more about edward because she is with him a lot to be with natalie and maybe she secertly wants to be there with edward and the rest of the family. then maybe tanya can come to 'check-up on natalie' and then suddenly wants to be in natalie's life. that's my idea. sorry that it's so long.

awesome! story was great!

update soon

GOD DAMNIT! JUST UPDATE ALREADY!

omg, this story is awesome

i love the plot it's really original. i dont think tanya should come back because i dont think she would change her mind about having nothin to do with her kid

please update soon

wow i love this story so far this is so kewl omg plz update soon i really wana no wat happens

i would like another chapter please

no tanya i don't like her other than that i love the story so far!

thanks for the story , im loving it so far . and im going right now to vote for the poll

Tanya

i will vote!

I don't think adding Tanya in would be a good idea but it's your story and it's just starting to get interesting update soon.

more chps

good story i like your idea!

I love your story!

you are so creative!

please update soon!