This is a nice story, but the grammar and spelling errors take away from the beauty of it. I suggest looking through your chapters and readin them out loud to yourself so that you can catch any additional errors you might have missed. I also suggest checking your spelling a bit more, for some words are used incorrectly or just simply misspelled.

That aside, I'm truly enjoying this story. I'm also pleased to see that there's a sequel. I really like the concept, and I hope that you write more stories in the future.

Best regards!

it may be that i'm just getting hyperactive after a Sasuke bashing session with Loki but why is Itachi starting to sound like me on a lazy day confronted with Rudolph the Psycho Reindeer

Hi there! So Idk if you still come on to this site but I absolutely LOVED this story to death, and I will be reading the sequel shortly. I read this all in one day since I have absolutely no life and because this story made me want to curl up in my room and do nothing BUT read it. I adored it!

Anyways I really just wanted to tell you how amazing of a writer you are and you inspired me to write a poem about this story if you want to read it at all... . Anywaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyys thanks again! bye!

AMAZING! and soo fricken HOT! .

Really love this story. You even kept the relationships between Sasuke and the other characters of Naruto in-character. Definitely one of the best Uchihacest stories out there.

Bwahahaha! *bangs hands on desk* way to go sasuke! no one can say you are a damsel in distress *grin*

lol a 40 yr old sasuke. That's epic! I'm really loving the story.

honestly I wasnt gonna read this because the mere image of Sasuke as an angel seemed so ridiculous. But I have to admit that he does seem in character and you made him interesting so I shall keep reading :)

UH-MAZ-ING! and hot!

OMYGOSH!

I LITTERALLY FANGIRL SQEED ON THE END OF THIS CHAPTER! Sooo cute!

Such a cute chapter! I love the affection between itachi and sasuke!

Interesting, I like it D

im writing this review at exactly 3:30 am. im so f*ckin tired, but i continued to read the story for 4 hours straight because it was so good. i am so gonna read the sequal! but not tonight. i need some serious sleep. good night. keep writing good stories ;D

I really liked this story.

the idea of this story is actually amazing! you have a great imagination. I love it :)