Reviews for He'd Be Proud
Papaleta chapter 1 . 7/10
So I just came here several years late...but I just wanted to say that I had a really good time reading this hahah
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
this story is bomb i laughed so hard
Lolly1o1 chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
Oh he'd be VERY proud
anonymous223468 chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
Hahaha I loved this story it was one of my favorites I still can't stop laughing I hope u continue it even though Hinata's personality is different the way she seduced naruto was great and all in all it was a great story and I had a lot of fun reading it. I also loved the way ended it even though I want you to continue it I just can't get over this ausome story.
TeresaLynne chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
Yes indeed, he'd be patting himself on the back and taking full credit for Naruto and Hinata's rendezvous! Of course, Hiashi might have a different view on the matter... Thanks for the post! :)
Raja-Ulat chapter 1 . 2/9/2015
Yup, he would be proud alright!
Werejaguar of Halloween Town chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
Have to say what totally did it for mea side from the Naruhina and Sakura getting put in her place, was the shadow clone at the end
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Nice
Amanthya chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Like
ZeronosVega chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
This is a memorial that Jiraiya would be proud of. It's a shame that this story has so few reviews, likely because of its age, because it does well as a comical one-shot.
DAKOTA chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
I LIKED IT IT WAS FUNNY HOW SAI NOTICED SOMTHING AS EASY AS A BRUISE WHEN SAKURA AND KAKASHI WERE WAY BETTER NINJAS THAN HIM ID SAY THEY WERE A BIT OFF TODAY
Ayrmed chapter 1 . 5/2/2014
So Jiraiya did get to him!
Great chapter 1 . 4/9/2014
Good point. Looking forward to more!
LoveGlutton chapter 1 . 2/1/2014
Do you have a prequel?
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