Loved it

Nice rendering of the awkwardness of that first date. When you've been friends for so long, it tends to up the awkward dial, and I totally got that. The neuroses of getting ready - with Clark super-speeding to a store - was a nice touch.

So nice! Mix of awkwardness, hidden attraction and mutial understanding makes the perfect date.

That was areally good story. It was well writen adn I liked the story line, very good job. I can so see Lois trying on outfit after outfit before going on a date with clark. :)

That was great! I think you did a great job dipicting both characters. This really IS a lot like what I picture their first date to be. The perfect mix of awkward, cute, and the great connection that always seems to accompany Clois.

"When I first met you, I thought you were naked - weird." :) Lol. I laughed so hard at this. Awesome story.

I loved it! It had the aspects of the Lois-and-Clark vibe, and it was great! Wonderful job!