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I don't like vegetables either! Luigenius must know!

This story is almost as good as The Room: Spongebob Edition.

And if you would please, please vote in my poll.

Yes! Yoshi didn't get eliminated. I'm just hoping he's not really talking and he's speaking his language which is being translated to English. Or was there a game when he learned to speak English? 'Cause I know he speaks by just saying his name.

Yoshi! (Translation: Yoshi's Island DS is the greatest Mario Bros. game ever! It's also the best DS game made by the Nintendo company of all time!)

I like this story. But most of these characters I don't know becasue I'm not as big a fan of Mario as I am of Spongebob. Like for example, I don't know what PIXL partners are or what TTYD stands for. Go Yoshi&Birdo! I think it's cinda funny how you're a contestant. Go DonPinata!1! I wish I could be on the Amazing Race

interesting. If only me and Luigi had gone into the door, we coulda shaved minutes off our time! D: Update quickly, I wanna see the finale of this leg! :D

WHAT! How can this leg hjave "Technical Difficulties" But the best part was:

Rock, paper… scissors!" they shouted. They looked at each other.

"We don't have hands," said Goombario.

"…" they said

That was pretty funny. But you can't just Pause the race. Oh well, update the rest soon.

You are reviewing my Amazing Race, so it's only fair that I return the favor. :p

WHAT! Dimentio and O'Chunks AND Dry Bones and Boo have already been eliminated? Super sadness! :( Well...there goes my pre-reading favorites. I didn't like Tippi and Thoreau that much so I am pleased to see them eliminated.

Yes, Mario Kart legs are getting popular! Coincidentally, both of our fifth legs were Mario Kart legs! :p

The merge was an interesting thing to read. A little confusing when I first heard about it, but I got to understand what it meant. I'm a little surprised Thoreau and Tippi had to suffer the extra long penalty, because the pixl had to wait out with the Shadow Sirens, but I don't really care. I didn't like them anyway. I much prefer the Shadow Sirens.

Your race is going by pretty good! I like it! I think it's going to be very interesting to see how it all comes out.

Personal favorites are Yoshi and Birdo (who I hope win), DonPianta and PPAD, Goombario and Goombaria, and Dot and Deb.

I'm excited for next update! :D

Nice... Not a bad crop of teams, and a pretty good first leg. I liked the Detour and the Roadblock, and the hints in the decoy clue boxes were pretty clever too. I'm glad to see O'Chunks and Dimentio gone. Not a huge fan of either of them. Right now, my top three would be Frankie & Francesca, Goombario & Goombaria, and Yoshi & Birdo. Keep up the good work, and I'll do my best to keep reading & reviewing.

WOW! Over 18,000 words. My TAR are never that long.

I like the merge idea. It does mix alot of things up. Thank goodness the Pixel Team went home, the Sirens are much better then the Pixels were.

Great Place to have the leg located.

Champ 15

Best leg so far !

1 : Mario Kart based legs are the best ! That's obvious.

2 : The Teams stopped helping too much each other. That's better in my opinion because they always were in packs and I found it a little repetitive/annoying. They are all enemies in some way after all.

3 : The teams were not always on the same place from the beginning to the end of the leg. In the previous legs, they were more or less at the same places.

That's what I thought it was the best, lol.

I'm kind of disappointed to see that Tippi and Thoreau had to leave the game. I reallyexpected the Shadow Sirens to be eliminated and I thought it was unfair to penalize once more Thoreau... And didn't Marylin & Vivian also cheat ? I mean, Vivian used her "Infatuate" move and they also used their power to sink into the shadows...

I'm rooting for Birdo & Yoshi, Luigi & Luigenius, Goombario & Goombario and DonPianta & PPAD.

I also think Birdo plays the game the best.

I'm sorry! So Luigenius and Luigi were still in the game. Sorry about that. D:

Confused O_O

But never the less awesome chapie _

Aw too bad Luigenius and Luigi aren't in the race. D:

I personally believe that Yoshi and Birdo will win the race for some reason..

D-PAD? I like it _. However PPAD is just P-P-A-D. Not P-PAD lol.

I'm off to read Chap 6. It's good so far!

PS: We won 1st place :D yay!

Awesome, although its not even really a real leg of the race...but putting in authors was definitely an original touch! And now I'm off to read some of the true race...

Dude, that took me like, an hour and a while to read. Longest leg of my LIFE! :D But that's good, it made for a fun read.

Dang, 18,000 words? That's incredible! Bravo!

Oh, and I'm glad it was the Pixels who are out instead of the Sirens. I was like, NO! Vivan and Marilyn! But then the last 15 minute penalty changed everything! I was happy to see the shift!

Another great chapter! Let's see, "Sink or Swim" I wonder what that refers too. . .Maybe. . .Keelhaul Key? (No idea)

Great job! Looking forward to more!

-Luigenius.

Heck yah I'm totally psyched to still be in! YEESH, that was close! Me and Luigi were doing good until we got bad directions from that one guy, and then we couldn't do anything right. We had some bad luck too, with the whole really hard clue and looking for the frames thing. I knew right then that we were in trouble. But at least we're still in!

Dot and Deb are now a scary team. I wonder who they'll choose to switch partners. Good twist there.

And once again, I gotta say it.

BirdoPathetic.

YoshiAwesome.

I understand wanting to win, but she's done this the whole race. I'm glad they got U-turned. Yoshi's cool though. Every good Amazing Race fic needs a villian team too.

And once again, my final 3 predictions are

DP and PPAD

Frankie and Francesca

Vivian and Marilyn.

My dark horse is still C11 and GLP, and next eliminated I think is still Tippi and Thoureou. I'm sticking with my predictions from last time.

Anyways, great chapter! You did a good job of describing a place that we've never seen in any games before. I still could picture it. Very impressive.

Can't wait for more!