That was amazing! I LOVE outsider POVs and this one was perfect. That conclusion was awesome and tied everything up so nicely! That was a great read.

Great story, thanks.

wonderful story. read with pleasure.

Ok I really like that point of view omg

squeeeeeeee loved it

this was so awesome

My goodness...one of the best outside perspectives I've read. awesome awesome story.

okay. now i see what is it that you meant when you said on the back flip abt this epilogue.
I really love this chapter more than the other twos.

thanks for a good story.

Very nice story. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Wish you could write a sequel where maybe the brothers run into Ben again. Would be cool!

When I read this story yesterday evening I liked this story you wrote. Thanks for posting it.

What a excellent look at Sam and Dean's relationship through the eyes of a stranger. Thank you.

ou why is this so short? (I know, it really can't be described as short but still... I want more! )
I enjoyed this story so much, I love outside pov and your's was just perfect.
really good fic, thanks for that!

I'm reviewing as a guest because ff's being stubborn and won't let me log in. My username's The-Alizarin-Possum534.

I don't review much these days but I figured this really, really, REALLY deserved more than a single silent moment of attention. Seriously, it's not often you stumble upon something so captivating! Ben's a fun guy to follow, he's normal and isn't of bad intent, but he doesn't just jump himself into the mess. Outsider POVs are fun to both read and write, but I often find trouble seeking a good first person where the oblivious narrator isn't being glared at by readers for being so plain cliche. I'm horrible at reviewing so I'll just leave it at I love the storyline, style, characters, and chapter lengths. Love those chapter lengths.

I'm sorry... that turned out into a rant, as a lot of my stuff does. Well, almost half a decade post and you're still getting reviews! Thanks for the story, and I think I speak for a lot of people there ;)

I love this. I absolutely love it.

Loved, loved, loved this story! You did an amazing job with telling one of their adventures of being in the hospital and from outsider's POV. I love reading how an outsider perceives our boys. And how you kept them totally in character. Loved your Ben too! But the last two sentences were perfect. Just perfect. Thanks!