I hope for more

nice story

nice keep going its good

Will you ever continue this story? I absolutely love the idea, though Ninja Storm wasn't my favorite series. Also, is this an 'evil Cam' fic, or more of a 'Cam finding his way back home'? (From just these two chapters and your other work, I'd assume it's the latter, but, always good to check.)

Nice idea. Sooo...is his mom still there in this one?

Please update? This is awesome!

If you were to continue with this idea of yours, I would love you forever! I love this idea of Cam being raised evil (or turned evil), I'm disappointed that there have been no updates- but I love the whole idea behind this fic. You have a good start, I hope you continue it in the future- I would love to read more and discover your vision of events.

I know it's been a while since u updated. I just now read this. Can u please update? I love this story

Loved to see more of this. It's very good and I like the idea.

This definatly looks like its going to be an interesting story...I really hope you come back to it soon...I can't wait to read more!

This is a cool idea. I am *very* excited to see it play out.

i really like the idea and how its working out so far!

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lol, a problem? Really Cam?

Looking forward to see what happens next.

Poor Cam having to put up with cousins like Mara and Kapri in the closed corters of a spase ship 24/7! His first meeting with Hunter and Blake should be interesting. When's that going to happen?

Nice start! I can't wait to se how this plays out. Keep up the good work!

~Dreamer