Reviews for Heaven Forbid
LashesToAshes chapter 3 . 7/6
That was stunningly well written.
I adored exploring their relationship through the present day upset and the flashbacks to happier times.
I really enjoyed Hermione's thoughts on the word love, and how much it gets over used and therefore loses its meaning, because that's so true.
I think you did a great job at balancing the arguments for and against the abortion and you could really feel why each of them felt they were in the right. I was hoping the entire time that Hermione would change her mind, but I am a sucker for a HEA. However, had you have written it the other way, I'm sure you would have done so tastefully.
The complexities of their relationship felt very real and I'm so happy they've both worked through it, even if they did have to suffer a bit first.
Thank you for sharing this, it is now one of my favourites!
reswalyn chapter 1 . 4/30
all the feelings crumbled and buried me... the intensity left me speechless... amazing work
Montana chapter 3 . 2/12/2019
This was soo good. What a rollercoaster. And the mixed timelines worked really well. The story is so immersive, and you really leaned into the tension when you wrote this; I’m glad you didn’t balk or shy away. Thanks for writing.
Nastya555 chapter 3 . 11/1/2018
This is so beautiful. I’m at loss of words. Just... beautiful.
LaBelladoneX chapter 3 . 10/25/2018
I really hope you're still writing! x
AnnaOxford chapter 3 . 5/10/2018
Omgggg, I loved this so much! And you’re so generous to have added the last part, I think most authors would have stopped at the scene where they reconciled in bed. But you added that most perfect, fluffy ending and I’m so happy.
AnnaOxford chapter 2 . 5/10/2018
Argh, my favourite and least favourite thing about angsty romance, the misunderstandings!
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
God, you write angsty Dramione so well
Raverin Prefect chapter 1 . 4/24/2018
Stunning. Well done.
DracoHermionelover98 chapter 3 . 2/18/2017
Wonderful story!
rezakeene chapter 3 . 10/21/2016
A wonderful little ode. Beautifully written
adamo393 chapter 3 . 7/30/2016
Brilliant, hust oh god all those feelings *hiccups*
AussieSweet chapter 3 . 5/18/2016
Funny how people can make problems out of nothing and then decide that they have ruined everything. I'm glad that both Hermione and Draco were smart enough to just think and talk about everything.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
First of all, fuck you for making me feel this way. I JUST FINISHED THIS ENTIRE THING AND I'VE BEEN CRYING FOR ABOUT AN HOUR NOW AND SHOUTING AT MY PHONE!

And second, KUDOS TO YOU YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER THE FEELINGS YOU CONVEYED WITH EVERY WORD WAS POWERFUL AND REALISTIC! THANKS FOR SHARING THIS TALENT OF YOURS TO THE WORLD
silver1995 chapter 3 . 11/2/2015
Aww this is so nice.. thank you for writing this story. :)
I love the plot of the story, it makes it kinda realistic unlike the other dramione stories where Hermione just got out of a relationship and then immediately jumped to being in love with draco.. I like it that there is a struggle between them and that they have to work hard to make their relationship work.. I love that it focused on them being humans with real emotions. This is an amazing story and I hope you write more in the future. :)
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