I think that was a great ending. really left me clam and peaceful.

Very good. The Calefornia reference helped make it really realisic.

I loved the way you portrayed them as a couple! It was too cute! The ending was fine how you wrote it! Great Job!

Oh. My. God.

That was so beautiful! You really felt the emotions, and it's written really realistic. I love Chad, I love Ryan, and I love them together.

Well done!

X~X~X Celia ~~