I loved it, it was a nice ending.

Short, sweet, and really hot lol loved it

This was sweet.

How God Created Mother

God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

You are too nice. He could've kissed my ass for all I cared. But I still like it so keep up the good work.

The first part kind of made me mad at Sessh,but the second part made me 'awwwww'

i loved it!

Interesting story. I love the way you give Kag's and Sesshy such a dramatic start.

This was deliciously sweet.

OMG! i love it!

please update soon!

you could make this longer than a 2 shot, but that is your choice. update soon