good one shot

This story was awesome. I loved the angst. Great job

so angsty and sweet!

That was great! The review under mine was completely wrong haha

Nothing mindblowing that leaves a lasting impression. I believe you want a little overboard with the adjectives describing Sakura from Naruto's perspective. Goddess, really?

Couldn't stomach the flowery banter between Naruto and Kyuubi. That crap never makes sense that it would ever be best buds with Naruto or vice versa.

Also what's with the change all of sudden from Baa-chan to Baa-san. That left me scratching my head.

Awww, great story! Good work!

I absolutely loved it! So full of emotion, I felt almost like tearing up. Great work, especially for your first story.

Very cute. I like it.

I can't really think of anything conducive to say, so I'll say this; it was very good, and you should keep up your work. More of this kind of thing would be excellent.

Awesome story :D

Oh my, that was so beautiful! Aw, such a cute ending. :) :)

Good story.

Hey, just to tell you, I liked the angst and i didnt think it was overboard. ) Keep writing!

Super cute )

it's so great)

cool story mang