HOLY SHIT THIS IS AWESOME. The Raw emotion and shock value. The dark side of their feelings... bravo. Please, for the sake of all that is good, FINISH THIS. 4 YEARS?! REALLY!? Don't do this... It's a very well-told story.

Seriously dude, are you ever going to finish this? I would love it if you did.

Dude WHY DID YOU LEAVE OFF WITH THIS WHERE YOU DID? You have to freaking finish it. I don't even care if it has a happy ending where everybody realizes the misunderstanding and things work-out for them, or a horribly tragic ending where Kenichi ends up a member of Yami. . .I just feel like this story needs to be FINISHED!

Do take your time to make an update that is good but don't take to long.

i have been waiting 2 years 4 an update can you at least do a rush end this story was poweful

This is a nice story, I dont know why u havent updated it for about 2 years, I dont think its done, but you should work on it again. You tell it well.

You have to finish this you have to!

you got to finish this

nice stoey

I like this story very much and can't wait to see where you take it. Please update soon.

There are only 11 or so fics in this genre so I wasn't expecting much. I wasn't expecting much so the decent quality of this fic actually surprised me.

Not to say that the fic is excellent by any stretch of the imagination. The plot seems contrived and there are holes big enough to throw Elder through. Your spelling & grammar is faulty at times but nothing too bad. I'm expecting all the sob cliches to be brought out in force, the last line in this most recent chapter had me wringing my non-existent beard. It's a small genre so the averageness of this fic is actually acceptable. If this was a Naruto or an HP fic then I would probably pan it because there is much better work whose example you might follow.

As it is I encourage you to keep going, the basic plot idea as it is, holes and all, is not so bad that I can't suspend disbelief. It's also a manga I'm very interested in at the moment. Your writing is certainly acceptable if not good I have no problem at any point following the storyline.

I can't wait to see how you are going to carry on with the plot.I feel that you run the risk in confusing your readers with such a complex job )

Vegeta, what does the scouter say about the angst level? ( think you can figure out the response...)

Very good, though there's a issue.

Elder says: 'We need to diffuse teh situation as soon as possible.'

This typo made me laugh pretty damn hard, probably due to who was talking to whom about what, it's kinda a mood breaker though...

Oh the Drama...

I love this story There aren't enough Kenichi FFs on this site, and the few we have should receive more attention

Please update soon, it's a joy to read this )

Faroush

Three Things about this chapter.

1. Saiga Fuurinji mad at you, that as bad as Godzilla worse because he's specifically after you.

2. Why would Saiga care about Miu, it's been implied that he murdered his own wife to get at Miu for some unknown reason unless... maybe they fell out because he was after the killing style to teach Miu and she tried to run when she refused to let it happen.

3. You need for them to find out at least she's pregnant, THAT will make for some fire works with ole Saiga and make for a loverly guilt-trip for our boy Kenichi.