That was an enlightening 'what if?' scenario. I quite enjoyed how Kakashi slowly changed into the caring, if seemingly indifferent individual he became. I also really like how you kept to Iruka's character despite his traumatic experience. Thank you very much for the day's read. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am looking forward to the followup. Thank you for writing! KTN

Lol how funny

Minato is still alive?!

I like how real you make kakashi seem. Very nice job

The grammar needs some work... Sometimes you use the wrong tense. Otherwise this is an amazing story.

Sweet!

Lol cute

This is well done.

Omg I really love this writing. I love how they became friends and the way you wrote their development. thanks so much for the writing!

Despite the grammar errors, it was a good story. Thank you

Omg! This was so perfect! I did even cry in some parts!
Gods, it's just so cute, perfect, and enjoyable that I want to print it and read all the time.
Or if this was to turn into a book, I would be sure to buy it!
I hope you write more like this

This is so super sweet. I like it

Your grammar is really off. You change tenses every other verb and sentence. I think your story is amazing otherwise. Hope things go well for them

omg that is so sad. i feel bad that kakashi has to do it after losing his sensei too. poor iruka omg

this is so interesting. love it