Hello! Maybe you can't finish this writing but I just want you to know that this is a masterpiece and I love it! :D

Chapter 13, by far, is my absolute favorite of all your works. Amazingly detailed and well written.

Hello, I'd offer you a signed review like I want to but I've been contemplating on going back and reviewing all of your chapters you have in this with more depth later, so to keep myself free of the review limit has placed on us I'm just going to have to suffer through anonymity (though you can find me at the same username on the site, if you felt so inclined). I would just like to say that, despite being very reluctant to read this - I had been expecting some Starscream/Alexis fic, I don't dislike them, they're just not my cup of tea - but I'm so pleased that I got over myself. You are truly a stunning author and your characters are so tangible. I hope you haven't utterly given up on this story but I'm still pleased with the ride.

If I find the time in my schedule you will most certainly hear from me again with a review decent enough to present to such a gorgeously written piece.

-Keenon

Shame it was never finished

Please finish this story!

Hm. Interesting. Off to read the next chappie.

I'm not a fan of slash, but even so this is a highly entertaining story. I really like Eclipse, especially considering she is Starscream's daughter (and he's my favorite Transformer) because in most stories he usually has a son, at least in the hetero ones that I've read.

Oh, and maybe you would want to stick this story under Skyfire/Jetfire and Starscream, rather than Starscream and Alexis, for, well, obvious reasons.

i bet its megatron

Great story. I love Eclipse. Some things are universal when it comes to parents, especially when it come to danger. I love how the "mechs" reacted to the "femme". It was cute.

I love this fic. Kind of slow paced considering it's a remake of the movie, but still. Love it. Hope you update soon!

Okay, I really like this one as well. Very nice twist with Eclipse not being Skyfier's daughter. Only leaves Megatron...but then it could have been someone else. Very interesting indeed. I hope you haven't lost interest in this story and maybe work on it some more.

Wonderful story. (-:

come and update this piece! it's a great story don't abandon it just yet!~

This is such a fantastic story- please update! :)

I like this story very much and that there is Sky/Star pairing in it is a big plus :D It's interesting and well written, i hope to see more of it soon :)

Well that threw me for a loop . I think I know who the other creater is and what a shock . Her color should of been the tip off. Now off to read What Darkness Brings, to find out the scoop.

Please continue to update soon.

keep up the good work.