Not being rude or anything but why do your chapters take so long to write yet they're so short? I finish a chapter in like 4-5 minutes. Even though you finished this say 8 years ago, I was just wondering... Nevertheless, good chapter! I like how Bella was "aggressive" with Edward towards the end!

It may have been a while, but I love this story. Btw, threatening are we? Lol but seriously this is a beautiful story and I like the fact that it's not too mushy and that it has a wonderful sense of humor. This is talent in one of its finest. I'm here and ready for new stories! TTYL
-XxRayag

This was soooo good I seriously want more stories like this! Keep writing!

Lol

Wow!love all the chapters especially the courtroom one!that was very funny also cuz of emmett's arguments!laughing really hard!

awesome i loved the whole 10 chapters just great!

What is the saturday Night Live reference? I didn't get it. Love this so far and reading on.

Im curious, how is it that you seem to completely ignore Renesmee's very unique way of communicating? and frankly edward sounds more like rose in this than edward. Edward genuinely cares for Jacob and is grateful for the many times and ways that he has saved Renesmee's life.

This was really good a lot of funny bits

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When Bella and renesme went out Edward and Jacob had a fight its a good thing that they did not kill each other because bella was not there to calm him down when they came home Bella saw jacob in tears so Bella knew that they had a fight and renesme got found guilty and she got mad

Edward and Bella had a fight about reneesmes relationship with jacob and she heard it and got mad and went to bed her mom was very sad and went to her room and talked to her about their fight and bella smoothed things out with her daughter and tucked her into bed and gave her a kiss on her forehead

When renesme got home her uncle was waiting near the front door while Bella and Edward were angry in their room when she went in Bella came out of her room and gave her a hug she was happy and talked to her about the date then after her mother gave her a kiss and renesme went to bed

Bella was getting her daughter ready for her second date and jacob showed up with his motorcycle as he was holding in his sobs , they went to a resturant where bella a d edward had their first date jacob and renesme were talking and they ordered a chocolate milk they both did and after there dinner jacob said that he has to talked renesme home because it was getting late so they went home

Renesme was about to go on the first date with jacob jacob made a promise to edward and bella that he would keep her safe at all times because jacob is renesmes protector and that he would not let anyone hurt her in any way