Laughter and tears in this one, Cal. It was well-written.

Your writing is incredibly poetic. I had to scroll back up and down a couple of times to figure out the 6-5-4-3-2-1 word(s) thing, but once I did, I kept trying to guess them ahead of time (I never did get it right...)
But you made me cry, which is pretty rare.
Wonderful piece, this is.
Keep writing!

wow, beautifully written.

Amazing.

A beautiful and well thought out retelling of Obito's story. It's also, as far as anyone knows, canon. The theme you used, counting down the words, was a really interesting ideas and you utilized it well.

Again, excellent job.
Issac

Oh. My. God. This story was amazing. So amazing in fact that it actually made me cry. I am seriously impressed by this. It takes a lot to make me cry just from reading something, so, this, my friend, is a major accomplishment. It was very touching and deep.

Keep up the awesome work. :)

Aw, it was wonderful! This fic felt so real, and you portrayed all the characters so well, espeically Kakashi. YOu managed to bridge all the gaps from the GAiden to the main story and THAT WAS AMAZING!

wowwie... that was AWSUM! the gaiden makes me cry, so this captivated me loads! thx 4 writing it!

Although I have nothing to say except "Congratulations! This story was undeniably fantastic and well-written!" I really feel compelled to leave a review, since this fic so obviously deserves it. VERY good job. I hope that you will write many more fics like this one. :)

Take care, and happy new year!

-IDIL

oh this is a great story, beautifully written! sad, but great. thank you for sharing.

That was so beautifully written. Amazing job!

amazing *sniff*

Wow, completely amazing. I love the emotion in this story, and the way you structured it. Extremely well written, utterly heart-wrenching. Great job, amazing job. Wow.