Reviews for This Christmas |
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![]() ![]() OMG! I totally loved this oneshot... Really angsty but you did great... Rash |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have seen this several times, even started reading it once. But, kinky person that I am, I was not interested with heterosexual Edward and Jasper. Hehe... This time I read the reviews of the 2nd Christmas series, and found out that it leads to slash! Now I am interested! Hahaha. It's more of a James and Edward story, Jasper at the side, and this is good. I only wish that James did something more, short of raping Edward. It would have been darker and jarring, still believable considering the state of mind delusional James is in. It would have cost a real trauma on Edward; right now, the experience would have been disgusting, but nothing traumatic that Edward can't get over with... But aside from my personal opinion (my comment should be taken lightly anyway :D), I like this 1st Christmas series. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How can only 12 people review ur story? It is amazing, I just wish it was a bit more graphic, haha. I realy enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading the other two stories that go along with it. I have a feeling that jasper feels a bit more strongly about edward than he realizes. Great job. Melissa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ed... James is a sick man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! that was really good. off to the next instalment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, man. That was good! James is really messed up. Poor Edward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with the story. The whole thing kept me interested and wanting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I need to confess i read it last night and then lay awake thinking about it, so this morning i came back online and re-read it. It's amazing. Just as good the second time, if not better. You said something about it being a 1 of a 3 part thing. Please hurry up with that. I can't wait to read what else Twilight based you write. I think i shall have to re-read this story again whilst i wait. Oh and I'm recommending it to all my friends! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! I got to read half of it now, and am printing off the rest to read in bed. :D Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously, this is the best Twilight fanfic I have ever read. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep going. I read it again and I want to read MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story! :) Please continue soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really unusual story, but i really like it. is the second one out yet? will it be added to this document or will it be a new one? please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job.. I would love to see a little more.. like what is wrong with Edwards shoulder.. how everyone reacts to them being gone for a week.. PLEASE |