Reviews for When She Smiles
Anonymous chapter 6 . 7/2
So I know I’m a decade late—like, literally lol—but just in case you still read these, I’m over here with tears cause I love this storyyy! It’s sooooo cute amazing job
me chapter 24 . 3/31
Noooooooooooo there's no more chapters I just have to see what's coming next noooooooo
me chapter 6 . 3/30
***growls annoyed***
You are going to make me cry at every Alice and Edward scene.
me chapter 4 . 3/30
Aaaaaw. During that Alice and Edward part I just started crying. Probably cuz I'm jealous. I've been jealous of my best friend for a while cuz she has an amazing, fun, kind big brother and I haven't seen my half brother in years so I get jealous all the time.
The story is amazing I absolutely love it
Qwerty chapter 24 . 5/3/2019
When will you write the next chapter?
Qwerty chapter 24 . 4/8/2019
When are you going to write the next chapter?
Qwerty chapter 3 . 4/7/2019
That was so cute!
Guest chapter 24 . 6/20/2018
soooooo... still waiting...
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 13 . 5/27/2018
Oh my goodness I don't know it my heart can take this!
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 10 . 5/27/2018
Oh my goodness my heart! What are you doing to it!
Anna-Mae1242 chapter 7 . 5/27/2018
Oh my fricken gosh poor Jazzy. Stories with kinds who have abusive parents always get to me.
umanaflorencia.a chapter 24 . 4/13/2018
Oh my dear god! no no ... just NO
It can not finish like that!.. my poor and fragile heart cannot stand it
Those two need the happy ever after ..They SO do please for haven sake dont give up this amazing, incredible master piece i have to say it ...it just so breathtakingly beautiful! I know It has been long seven years since the last chapter and know is your choice but if u havent give it up .. please please keep up i will love to read more ( me and a lot of others) ! As for now well.. just thanks for writing and sharing it! And Thank you for making me happy :)
My best wishes
Lana chapter 7 . 5/5/2017
In my opinion one of the most heartbreaking things in the world is child abuse. Great story, hearttouching conflict
soccermom101113 chapter 24 . 3/23/2017
NOOOOOOO, you can't leave us hanging:( PLEASE update!
Guest chapter 24 . 12/8/2016
You're the best writer EVER! But how often do you update?
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