this is soooo good. i really like it!

I really liked it :D

I almost feel sorry for Edmund, waking up to find his siblings again and again. :) I love the stories.

So... brotherly. I love it. Very nice.

I loved it! Great description :)

Very touching.

Like all the other three, great story. It's a bit scary when Edmund's like 'All your fault...' to Peter. O.o

Anyway, sweet. I love the idea of Edmund's siblings worrying over him like that, especially after the battle.

Great story!

I look forward to any other Narnia fanfics you write. :)

~Alyssa

PS. Are you Australian? I am. Well...Chinese Born Australian...CBA :)

Adorable ) It made me feel all warm inside.

Nice one. I enjoy specially last part: Peter's plan to make sure they share room can be read as more than "mother hen" attitude, his own desire to stay closer.

Love it, love it, love it! :)

Narniachick

i loved this story,a nd the entire seris! You rae an amzing writer, so please contiue writing these awasome, amazing stories!

Can you do one for edmund

This was a awesome story. I think it would have been cool however, if you have had Edmund wake up and Peter and Edmund talk about the dream. But over all, you did a great job!

As Always,

Desi

so cute! you wrote peter's character very nicely too.

Nice brotherfic and good discription of the dream and Peters subsequent feelings.