Reviews for Baptism |
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xxnarufanxx chapter 24 . 9/18/2013 this story seems sooo interesting! please please update! |
December-the-6th chapter 24 . 11/16/2012 Your story's one of the best and realistic romance I ever read! I hope you'll continue it someday! |
Fire-within-victory chapter 1 . 11/15/2012 I really am enjoying your story! I am so sad you stopped updating! PLEASE KEEP WRITING. I've never been a big fan of this pairing but you make it work perfectly. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.(I had to say it again for emphasis) |
Nvey chapter 24 . 8/14/2012 Damn, I didn't realise this wasn't complete and hadn't been updated in a long time! Gutted! |
Guest chapter 24 . 7/7/2012 This is so well written! The plot has me begging for more, and i simply adore your writing style! Please continue because I'm salivating for more! But i do have a question, why hasn't Winry made an appearance other then offhanded mention? |
rabid kuma chapter 24 . 6/22/2012 Sooo sad right now. I was thoroughly enjoying this. Not a particular fan of this pairing but you had my hopes up! Gah! |
Pidgeon-san chapter 24 . 4/30/2012 Really enjoying this story. Never really read anything with Russell starring before but I'm not disappointed :) |
The Curse of Forever chapter 24 . 2/25/2011 I turned out liking this more than I thought I would. Good work. I hope your muse hits you with the frying pan of inspiration so you can update soon _ |
Enkay chapter 24 . 2/19/2011 Mmm, beautiful. The flow, structure, and diction of your writing is just wonderful. I'm usually not a fan of first-person POV in fanfiction, either, and you made that work too. I also want to commend you for having a grasp of how a person's neuroses and sense of self-worth can affect their relationships, and also for putting that across well in your writing. Some people are probably hounding you for developing Edward and Russel's relationship so slowly, but I think that's great, considering how you chose to write Edward as a character. So keep on goin' like you're goin'. All in all, this is a great story. It is JUST what I look for in fanfic, and I will be eagerly awaiting another installment. Keep up the great work. |
blackash chapter 24 . 2/8/2011 Oh, Ed. You would prefer a psychotic episode to reality, wouldn't you? Anyway, great chapter, if a bit short. I'd honestly almost forgotten about this story, but it's very good and I hope you'll update again soon. :) |
DSM-IV chapter 24 . 2/8/2011 Yay! I'd hoped that you'd do another chapter! Edward's analyzation of the situation is really well done and accurate for someone who has panic-induced hallucinations. The metnal issues he faces a pretty on the nose. His relationship with Russel is interesting as well, not too rushed and the way Edward sort of tests the water is convincing. I can't help but wonder if Edward would be more suspicious of Russel's motives though? |
Ruslover chapter 23 . 1/26/2011 you have to update it is getting suspenseful waiting |
thebestIcan chapter 23 . 7/22/2010 OH MY GOSH! I loved it! I can understand Ed's apprehension, the poor guy has had nothing but bad luck from the beginning! But yay! Great job, can't wait for the next chapter! |
DaisyAnimeluvr chapter 23 . 7/22/2010 Poor, poor, confused Eddo. I'm glad you updated! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
Just a person chapter 23 . 7/22/2010 Every chapter has me dying for the next one! I normally don't like yaoi relationships (they are usually very out-of-character), but you handle it so delicately and so well that it's beautiful. One can't stop watching as these characters fall and pick themselves up again over and over. I just hope Ed tells Russell about the shower incident eventually! It's really not good to hold it in that long... |