Nice job, love it

hehe, love. :)

This story was really good. Even though it had a sad ending, I really liked it :)

Wow, I loved this! It was... refreshing. Not your typical just-like-every-other-Seddie fanfiction. It was realistic, but it fit so well. I just loved the writing style, the inner dialogue, and just his... inner voice I guess would be the word. xD Hard to put it into words. His outlook, maybe.

Anyway, yeah. Loved it. Fabulous job. :)

hey, dude! this is so cute! :) i so love your writing tlga.. :D ahaha.. request naman dyan.. kung di ka busy.. :D ahah.. try mo ung song na "nasaan ka na" ni nyoy volante.. ehehe. kung di ka naman busy.. :D

Yeah okay, this story was awesome! I definitely loved all the details about it, like how Freddie is so obsessive about his car, and how Carly and Sam take friendly advantage of his mobility. The three friends are still the three friends, just older. What I liked best about this story is how you gradually see how much closer Freddie and Sam are, and how much better they get along. You also gradually see Sam how Freddie sees her; as a girl he spends a lot of time with, but wants to spend more. And then, all of a sudden, the rug's pulled out from under you. She's got a boyfriend. I love it when stories surprise you like that. It's like you're gradually rising higher, and then you fall straight down.

I'd definitely like to see more experimental stuff like this from you. It's way more exciting when people write stuff that's different once in a while. Sometimes, stories are better if they don't have a happy ending. In short, loved your story and hope you keep cranking! As for me, I got a date with some Chinese homework.

Archilochus

Loved it! It was realistic, in character and the whole story seemed to flow. I loved how you described Freddie doing research on the cars, very in character.

I needed a bit of cute freddie jealously today :D haha

Of course, I love it Cheska. :) Hahah. I don't have any tips for improvement. It's quite perfect.

Aww...I liked it. Nice to see Freddie be the jealous one for once. But, only a one-shot? Really? This story just begs for a sequel.

Really cute! I really enjoyed reading it! :)

I liked this it was cute btw I hate Tuesdays too (well sometimes) lol

Hm. I liked it :D Even the ending.

Nice work :)

awe i liked it

I loved it

ohh that was really cute