Reviews for Reversal of Fortunes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahahah! Man, I'm REALLY starting to enjoy this story! Too bad it's so short and long abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude, I know a lot of people have already said this, but you should seriously continue this story. It's fantastic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god i can't believe i found this gem. this has wonderfully realistic characterization and i never read the original story but damn i really really hope shampoo and ukyo end up together. i'm ecstatic, honestly, to see such a good author tackle this completely unexplored pairing. i'm just lamenting the fact that it hasn't updated since 2009. i really hope you continue with it to the end. i'll keep waiting |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was gonna point out that at one point Nodoka did once see Ranma in male form that broke the contract in an omake and chased him about to enforce it only to bang her head and thought it was a dream. But the scare tactic is valid. Hmm the idea about Shampoo's father is interesting, if I actually get around to writing a fanfic it would certainly fill out her profile |
![]() ![]() Noooooo, I really want to see how there plan worked Please UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, it cuts off THEN?! Come ON! That's just not fair... Well, cliffhanger aside, this was an interesting read! Stories where there's a somewhat civil team up between any of the fiancees are rare from what I've seen, and you plotted and scripted this quite nicely. Special commendation in that this is probably the only fanfic I have ever seen the existence of Shampoo's father acknowledged; good characterization of him too. It was fun to watch canon conflict with the new plotline you'd set up, with Taro messing the whole plan up in typical Nerima fashion. I'll still follow in hopes of a revival someday. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy this story. Also thank you for including Shampoos father. You are literally the first author I've seen to include him in any capacity, much less a main character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this already over? I've enjoyed reading it, I don't really mind if a chapter's too long, as long as the content's nice. There were some mistakes on grammar and typeset, but it's all over great...are you still writing this? |
![]() ![]() I really like this story. When do you continued it ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol: "It was a cow. A hairy, big flying cow." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually really like your idea, here. Your grammar is also quite good. If anything - akane seemed slightly - over the top angry? still good character accuracy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love the your story. It's a really original idea, so I hope you update soon. Especially since you left us with such a big cliff hanger. Please update as soon as possible. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please update this grand fanfic again! I sooo look forward to see RanmaXShampooXUkyo matchup ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been a good read so far. And Pantyhose Taro really got a pretty nasty attitude, doesn't he? Just the type of guy we love to beat down into the ground. The bird-watching-peepin-on-Ranma scene was hilarious. Though, I can see how Nabiki came to that conclusion... It did hint at something naughty, didn't it? Keep up the great work, yeah? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never seen Ranma's situation put like this. Abusive home, and Shampoo and Ukyo being the only ones keeping him sane. It's kind of interesting, and the only flaw I see in this is the fact that Happi came way after Cologne so their arragement doesn't make much sense. |