DAAAMMMNNN! That was beautiful! Just like Tolkien wrote.

sasuke: give me that book
naruto: no
sasuke: naruto you baka, give it to sasuke
naruto: fine, but you should be warned *hands him book*
sasuke: what language is that. nevermind its not worth my time *gives book back*

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Well that not true because shinobi are trained to aim for places like that Sorry just some cool facts

Wow what a fantastic ending ! I loved it ! It was such a long and well written story, all the details are amazing ! Thank you. I just wished we had seen granny Hinata in the epilogue

I wonder what Morgoth did to Madara ! It’s going to be an interesting last showdown

Jiraiya’s not dead ? Well I can laugh all I want without feeling bad now !

Is Naruto wearing a traditional samurai armour ? I need to look it up to see how cool it is

I’m sorry but I laughed when Jiraiya sacrificed himself. He wants to make up for not being there by not being there anymore ?! That was the worst thing to say dear pervert

What an epic showdown ! As much as I was expecting it to be !

Now Kakashi, say thank you to Kakuzu for explaining his mysterious power like a dumb beginner !

YESSSSS ! His head exploded like a watermelon and it was amazing !

“The Second Battle of Pelennor Fields” what an epic name for this battle...

Well huh... I was wrong but when I had this idea I thought it was brilliant.

Epic siege ! When does Sasuke die ? Please, pretty please, when will he get slaughtered ?

Okay I stopped when I read that Naruto gave up his sword and everything. Let me guess: is it like when Gandalf arrives at Rohan and Saruman is possessing Theoden ? Will Shion be possessed ?

I was gonna comment on the fact should’ve much more powerful while facing ennemies attacking Suna but refrained as I was sure you already knew and also because it would make a less epic battle. So I extended my disbelief a little...

Same thing in this chapter. First splitting up was not a good idea and you toned down the power of ninjas otherwise the orcs would’ve been dead very quickly. They’re basically samurai (if you see what I mean, they just have swords and armour, that’s all). They don’t have chakra so ninjas are stronger and way faster than them and normally their armour is pretty basic. If Naruto had used a nice wind jutsu to blow everyone away and then swarmed them with clones, all the orcs would’ve been killed and only the ninjas would’ve remained.

But I know exactly what you had to do here. I’m writing a Harry Potter/Star Wars story and I’m trying to find ways to not make the Jedis and Siths too strong as they could easily kill any wizard without effort... It’s difficult to make it convincing

Yessss Gandalf-Sensei ! Was will he tell Naruto ?

Ohhhh I can’t wait for Sasuke to get destroyed, he’s such an arrogant little shit, I hope he suffers *chuckles evilly*

Suna is gonna need reinforcement, they won’t be able to withstands against such a force, especially with so many Akatsuki members, including Pein

Grrr Sasuke just makes me angry. Him using this kind ignorant sword makes me want to tear his eyes out.

I wonder how much more powerful Naruto an Hinata will be with Sage Mode !