Things are getting even more interesting now that Axel showed up! I can't wait to read more. Update when you can! 3

Uh, yeah... that settles it. I love this. :P

I definitely love Axel's sexy spy pose. Monocle and all. And now I have to draw that, lol.

I'll send you a note if I ever do draw it~

Thanks for the awesomeness!

I love it so far! Can't wait for more!

This is great! The characters are spot on and I actually like the lenght of the chapters. I prefer to read many smaller ones than a couple of realy long ones XP

Anyway, do continue writing this please!

cant wait for the next one x3

... Axel has a monocle? XDXDXD that is... an hilarious image. Seriously...

And Roxas, to be honest, you really aren't being the most supportive you could be. Try talking to Hayn instead of being bolshy and maybe things will go better? XD

BWHAHAHA! My Saturday was pretty alright, but not as good as your's Seifer! XD

No way were they out of character at all! Infact, I could honestly imagine all of them doing that one day in the game. That would be hilarious! I'm really starting to get into my Seiner more and more, and this is actually a very good one. Keep it up yeah?

...I love Seifer so far

...but...

Hayner is too girly...he doesn't have much of a part and is too easily pushed around by Roxas...why is Roxas keeping them apart when he could tell Hayner's refusal of Seifer was only because he was watching?...Fuu is an angel in this...I'm using too many dots.

and please...GIVE HAYNER MORE DIALOGE!HE'S TOO PASSIVE IN THIS!...and make a spot where Seifer explains why he likes Hayner?

the previous review was from the first chapter...and I didn't wanna write another until I was caught up(I didn't notice the number of chapters...oops)

Seifer was PERFECT...

Hayner was perfect to a point..but I think it might just be my love of having him slightly unwilling that makes me say that and not any ACTUAL out-of-character-(ness?)

Imagining Olette trying to act out Fuu is one of the creepiest things I can imagine...I'm sorta scared of Olette..she's one of the girl characters that looks and acts innocent...but could easily be a fangirl extremist...which are scarier that an army of rabid ninja-vampire Elmos *shudders*

but yes Seifer was wonderful...and I'm picky with the Seifer portrayals ..I won't even finish a fic if he's not in character...

It's so CUTE when he threatens the audienceXD!

Just a quick note because I'm OCD: you put 'weekly' instead of 'weakly.' So, lol, unless Seifer smiles at Fuu every week...XD

Beyond that...love it. Love. It. Maybe moving a bit fast, but, y'know, I take...what, nine chapters to get any actual romance in my stories? So you should probably ignore me on that count. lol

-EtheG

PS- totally didn't skip Jade's chapter on purpose...just wanted to continue reading and am too lazy to go back and review. I definitely loved Roxas' little bitch fit. X3

*still giggling*

This...is TOO CUTE. Omigoodness. Don't worry about your characterization - I could completely see all of Hayner's gang doing this, and Seifer and his gang reacting like they did. XD

It just...and...gah. I can't even articulate anything right now. I love it!

-EtheG

Hi Emy-chan~! okay, so I probably won't have time to write the next chapo until this weekend, but I commend your abilities my friend! And your ability to LISTEN TO ME WHEN I TELL YOU TO POST THINGS! 3

Lovely as always, hun. I'm kind of in love with your Seifer voice, btw. My inner Hayner will be running away with him soon I think... As soon as I have time, I'm on this next part like whoa!

I love that song. o:

8D yay! Lol, I wonder /why/ Hayner's limping? *Grabs popcorn*

OMG. YOU FINALLY UPDATED.

I NEARLY SPAZZED WHEN I SAW THAT YOU UPDATED. :'D

Okay, exaggeration. But I was really happy. :D

Cause I was just reading this today at school, and I was like to my friend, "read this." and shes like, "OMG, IT'S SO GOOD." and then I said, "Yeah! I KNOW RIGHT? but...I wish they'd update..."

AND THEN NOW YOU DID!

I've got magic powers! :'D

One thing.

"I smiled weekly at her" It's weakly. xD Don't worry though. I make those kinds of mistakes too D:

BUT OMG.

Seifer should totally push Hayner against moar walls.

And make out with him. Hayner knows he loves it. ;]

Ahh, you guys are amazing. Update quickly again! Or slowly. I don't care, as long as I get to read another awesome chapter. :D

I hope I got first review for this chapter. LOL.

Enjoy the long review.

I really liked the chapter. 3 A lot.

-His Last Walk