Yum! You got some dee li cious smut right there! I'm drooling all over... *_*

Great job with it! I only wish I could write lemons as good as you can... :) X3

i love this fic

OMG i really like it!XD it so detailed that i can imagine. good job!3.. if u can, can you keep on writing the same pairing because i really like it. i think the story is smut enough but if you can, you make it more hotter! thank you

This was fine. People can get the main story out of this, so don't worry about it too much. All I have to say, really is that there are some grammar and spelling errors you can look over. Other than that, I think this was pretty okay. Thanks for the 692718. ;]

okay... i'm still in awe that they... what's that? two-timed?

yea

study abit

dont have to much going on , but great AWESOMNESS XD

same here

though i couldnt write a proper one just yet Lol