Good story i couldn't stop reading once i started

I wish it was longer

Fantastic story

Dogs for both of them...first time I've read as an animagus forms, usually it's phoenix, griffins or dragons

Ginny is included...loving this

Super hate what JK did at the end of book 6

Noticed a small mistake. In the previous chapter you have Dumbledore say that Nagini was killed in the battle when Harry and the others were recovering the Horcrux. The in this chapter you have "the snake" roaming the battlefield trying to kill members of Harry's army. If Nagini was dead, who was that snake?

Why would Minerva need those things, (map, way to disable the wards etc) when they will be returning shortly after they left. In real time they weren't going to be gone long.

Okay, first you have Harry stating that all the Horcruxes are destroyed including Nagini, but then you have the snake attacking Harry's supporters. A little continuity error there.

You should try to identify the speakers more ofte. Sometimes it's hard to know who is speaking. Also, add some kind of scene break when the location changes. Describe the setting more as I found myself thinking they were one place, only to find there were elsewhere.

Why was Ginny previously worried about not having used contraceptive charm when they had decided to have kids? And why do they now have The Pill with them?

I like this story but one thing. Harry tells Ginny they have to keep the secret of Harry dying to themselves and as soon as Ginny disappears he starts talking to Remus about it?

That was brilliant.

Hello again,

I couldn't stop to review, I like the whole story I hope you do sequel let us know about the Baby, vacation, jobs and the rest of H&G family and friends.

Good luck in all you do and hope to get an author's alert that you at it again.

Or another H&G story.

Thanks for the ride.

MJ also known as Miss Millie

Hi,

I love Neville and Luna being included. They make a great couple.

I wish our pictures could talk...and move.

I think you are going to only improve your skills as an author as the story continues. You can put so much in one Ch and it all just floes into the next.

Keep smiling it makes people want to know what you are up too.