Reviews for Mirror, Mirror
Paulina chapter 1 . 6/16
I read this in two days and i Love it. Too bad you didnt finish it, i hope you’re fine
weirdhead chapter 20 . 6/5
You did nice job there. Vicky doesn’t like Hermione for what she is... and in canon, Vicky doesn’t trust in his girlfriend, and asks a fourteen year boy that if he has a thing for Hermione. Really, Vicky? Are you that insecure?
weirdhead chapter 19 . 6/5
People really try to make Krum some good bloke, well he is not. Ofcourse he won’t defend her honour if Malfoy called her a mudblood. Look at Bill and Fleurs' wedding, Viky was the real womanizer, who tried to hit on Ginny.
Maelstrom Potter chapter 27 . 5/6
I honestly love this story and I'm sad it won't be finished. I love your writing and as it seems like there won't be an ending I'd like to propose a theory. Dumbledore is trying to make Ron stay in his world forever.
A.C.nelli chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
I was sad about seeing this story incomplete.
I'm even sadder now to know you passed away.
May your creative and talented soul rest in peace.
guest chapter 7 . 9/20/2019
pansy isn’t blonde
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
Well done. In fact you manged to discribe Ron's thoughts so well, that you don't need to include the text from the flashback.
Clinio chapter 18 . 8/25/2019
Unfortunately we will never know if this mirror was a skillful manipulation of Dumbeldore or, of the universe from which Ron came had as differences that his friends were hypocrites.
LoneTraveler chapter 27 . 7/2/2019
I really liked the premise, I haven’t seen hardly any stories where Ron gets to go to an AU. It’s a fun jaunt. That said, I thought you spent too many chapters setting things up in the past of how the two worlds are different. Dumbledore wasn’t a Mary Sue, but it was almost too easy that Ron could be brought up to speed in one night. Also, I like that there is a bit of interaction with Harry.

It’s been years, so I think the authors notes have served their purpose. Now, they’re just in the way. I recommend deleting most of them, and just let the story speak for the most part.

I really hope you do come back to this someday and develop the story further. But I can see why it might be tough, these last couple chapters you’re getting into the meat of it. If you’re not ready to write something novel length it would be tough to finish.
Niel2804 chapter 27 . 3/27/2019
I really enjoy this story, and sad to know that the writer is passed away, RIP BlackHawk13
StoryFinder1 chapter 27 . 2/18/2019
I have thoroughly enjoyed your story! It is so nice to read one with Ron as the main character. You have done a wonderful job keeping to the characters, yet having them reflect the changes that you have made to their reality. I cannot wait to see how the story ends, and will be keeping on the lookout for your next update, whether it is in a few weeks or months. Thanks for a fun story!
GodFact chapter 5 . 2/4/2019
Rons not this stupid I can’t read this any longer
Fernanda chapter 18 . 1/21/2019
Bater no Ron ou matar Dumbledore ou caçar o autor? Tenho que aprender a definir prioridades.
litwater44 chapter 1 . 1/8/2019
Damn this was a good story, I created my own Ron story inspired off yours. Rest In Peace Blackhawk
Guest chapter 18 . 12/8/2018
As the Author's note says, it's not over or complete but honestly?

Mirror of Ytissesscen/Necessity? I'm thinking the mirror showed that part (and cut the others) to let Ron concentrate on this dimension. Because it's *nessesary* for him to help this universe first.
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