You also seem to have an unrealistic view of college life. Like the existence of Co-ed dorms, and that boys and girls won't try t get each other into their dorms.

I like a lot of things about this story, but at times I find it a bit too unrealistic. Of course, the show is unrealistic so I don't hold that against you (I mean unrealistic show as in mystical monkey power, time monkey, synthase ones, and all the other comically improbable things in Kim Possible) Anyways, my only other issue with this is that it is SO cliche to the point where I just can't take it anymore. Some people like that, but it's not my cup of tea. On my final note, kudos to you for great grammar, writing style, and keeping the characters in character for the most part.

The end of the previous chapter as well as the beginning of this one was quite a shocker.

That Captain Julius is such a big jerk. He may have been doing his duty, but he was taking to much pleasure in grilling Kim Possible. I probably would consider this guy a villain in some way.

It goes to show you that there are people outside the super villain community who have a thing against Kim Possible and want to grill her.

But at least Kim was released and Julius' plans to further ruin the teen hero were sunk.

Only one word: Great!
Simpy a great, great, great story!

Seems to me that Kim is starting to train Ron. He was eating like a pig, but she gave him a little scowl and he remembered his manners.

Thanks for an awesome story and your dedication!

University is a big thing, let's see if Kim and Ron are capable to have a normal life without get stressed when they save the world...

I've just finished reading through this whole story, and I've got to say I loved it. You captured the characters really well, whilst keeping to the feel of the show. Great stuff! :D

Im re-reading this FF again cuz it was so good. You already set up the 2 characters who tries to break KP and RS apart. Im not gonna spoil anything, but this FF had Wayne and Stephanie as pretty major characters, with more develop than other FFs ive read.

I love how you keep the stories clean and it doesn't become raunchy. I also love how instead of jumping to conclusions, Kim and Ron communicate with each other. I have read a few of your other stories, Tunnel Vision and the sequel and enjoyed those as well. Thanks for writing good clean stories of Kim Possible!

Overton? Very nice! :) perfext song 4 Stephanie! My one complaint is that everyone still idolizes Ron and Kim to almost a rediculous level...other than that love it still!:)

Ron and Kim r just TOO adorable! Love how you portray them! :) love the story

Loving your story so far! Great characterization

This story sounds so much like me. I have such a hard time saying no when people need me and as a freshman in college also it sounds just like me! lol. Thanks so much for all of your writing. I will continue reading all of your stories. They are amazing!

Incredible! Amazing! Fantastic! I love how in character you keep them. I love their relationship. I love love LOVE the storyline. This has been one hell of a ride and thank you for taking me along XD