you managed to keep Naruto's personality while making him mature.
RESPECT

can u please update it i wanna see the rest

Update bitch

y my cat?

dame un gato :v

Loved this STORY

this is the second time I have read this story and it was still as entertaining as the first time absolutely love this it is so far my favourite NarutoXTenten fanfic keep up the good work

Why would he need a sword to manipulate wind chakra?

Well this was interesting guess I'll have to check out the adultfanfiction lemon

Well this was another great chapter Naruto beating the other Jonin was cool, Anko interrupting NaruTen's make out session that may have gone onto more amusing also, Iwa are really just morons, Tenten now knowing the truth was cool I wonder what happens next.

Well that was interesting there first bump in the road I liked that both SakuTsunHina and NejiLeeGai warned both NaruTen not to hurt the other and I could hardly ever see Naruto doing that anywayz

Well that was interesting and they've finally taken the plunge and got there relationship to the next lvl. Naruto having his first kiss and sex with Koyuki was awesome she's a total babe

Well that was interesting and amusing I didn't comment last chapter but the fact even Sakura admitted that she may have ended up with Naruto was nice in a way, of course if they did this story would be weird even though I think Sasuke's got as much emotions as a piece of turd, she could have done better but whatever this is NaruTen so whatever, I liked the training and there slow build bond, I do wonder when it progresses but I can wait for now

Well I must say NaruTen sure are getting closer it's cute

Well this was interesting and they do make a cute pairing