Lol. xD Is there going to be more like what happened after? :D This was good!

this is really good! are you going to continue with it or not?

i feel kinda sorry for allen at the end lol XD

the end is funny

love how naughty this is :3

OMG your on my favourites list now

i like the ending

thats it, your goin on my list.

haha the ending is classic! this may be my first time seeing Allen drunk. lol Kanda's line was perfect. You know you write really good stories? lol i hope you write other good ones! _

it could be a good beginning. why won't you continue ?

just a question : why did you edit the text in this form ?

"Slowly he kissed Allen to try and sooth the younger male and get him to relax before he crushes little Tyki"

i dont know why but this line had me laughingXD

awsome fic!

hahahah awesome! love ur story.

pls update soon..and more tyki/allen pls!

kyahahaha! perfect timing guysXD but... it would have been hillarious if they cought them in th emiddle of the act!XD anyway, love it! *sparkle*

Hum... what I could say... I found this chapter really funny but the spaces between each line are a bit unnerving to me... but don't mean me, I'm just not accustomed to it ! '

(P.S: I apologize to you if I made some grammar error, English isn't my main language)

TykixAllen ! My favorite pairing ! Your scenario seems interesting !