Reviews for Betrayal's Touch
Luna from Harry Potter chapter 29 . 7/26
i love this fic so so so much
Luna from Harry Potter chapter 9 . 7/25
i thought his middle name was something else
ChaoticInscriber chapter 18 . 7/4
I can't help cackling at Dumbles expectation of being able to have the Weasley's manage Angelus - if anything he's been giving off quite the Ravenclaw vibe to anyone who's had a chance to interact with him often. Knowing what the audience does about the little Saviour's plotting he could also get shunted quickly into Slytherin, that plotting feels very Ambitious and so does his intent to show up at Hogwarts solely to **** with Dumbles and keep him off his family's bother.
This is entirely aside from our protagonist's awareness of such machinations and the irritation to be had if he bends to them even slightly.

Also, I know exactly who the would-be professor is and my grin is a bit alarming as a result. I wondered if that would be the path he was considering when he started plotting a future that includes stalking his adoptive baby brother...

This is quite fun.
Black reaper of darkness chapter 29 . 5/28
please update
RavenWolf9212 chapter 29 . 5/22
I love this please update!
nevercommentingagain chapter 29 . 5/18
This is wonderful and one of my most favorites. I hope you come back to writing. Stay Safe
nevercommentingagain chapter 23 . 5/18
Dumbles is acting like Hitler in this "The wizarding world needs to be cleansed for the greater good." That and his opinions of creatures, certainly bring to mind Hitler and those of the Jewish faith. Are we certain this is Dumbles and not Grindewald? (Sorry if that's not spelled correctly) Stay safe
Caramel4me chapter 29 . 5/4
I was really enjoying this and excited to get more into the different relationships and action of the story! Thank you for what you have written, I hope one day you come back :)
leviOsanotleviosaaa chapter 29 . 4/29
i so love this story! i was so caught in the story that i nearly cried when i saw it was the last chapter
jmw03u chapter 29 . 4/24
I absolutely LOVE this story. You have Angelus as smart!Harry without making everything (except magic) easy for him. I love that he still has challenges he has to overcome despite being gifted. The bonds he forges with others is also fun and comforting. Thank you for writing this!
jmw03u chapter 17 . 4/23
I have loved the time Angelus spent at Siren's academy. I look forward to the flashbacks. I think the Necromancy classes were particularly fun, though Anton's interactions with Angelus are adorable too!
jmw03u chapter 16 . 4/23
Yay! The cat lives! Thank you!
jmw03u chapter 15 . 4/23
So, I am really enjoying this story. The cat made me really sad though. I get that he was trying to make a point, but it wasn't the cat's fault. Sad now. Still reading though.
LeAnn chapter 29 . 4/17
I must admit that this was a very entertaining read. I thank you for your contribution to this wonderful website.
Anguis Reginam chapter 29 . 3/13
Holy rabies. I read this in one sitting...I know it's been like 2 years since the update but omg this was great tysm
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