Oof okay so I love the plot and story and all but holllyyyy shit my dude, this story is giving me fucking whiplash. Like I’m no writer so I dunno if this is a problem or not or like an actual way of writing but, like this story went from Edward and Bella super stand off ish to like them willingly cuddling? After he snuck in? And then mike going from like tiny smol nice bean human to a rapist? Like some of this stuff is like going a thousand mph when some of it should like yeno, played out and explained and all.

I enjoyed and loved the storyline/plot. Well written, great flow. Great characters, thank you for sharing.

That was sweet. I really loved your fic. This Edward just became my favorite of all time. I can't believe you actually made me cry and lough at the same time. I wish I could say more but I kind of suck at English. it was really fun reading your work I hope you are still writing. Good luck.

Awwww they are sooo cute! I love this Edward and those silly names he comes up for Bella. I was wondering when the chef will catch them and boy was it worth the wait. All though I feel bad for Edwards broken arm. Anyway i loved it.

Now I want to beat the crap out of Edward. Both of them are insane.

What the hell is wrong with that Bella? God I want to beat the crap out of her. Urggh.. I hate her.

These two both need a smack in the head and some lessons in communication

I'm glad he got pissed and had his say. Bella did him wrong

I like Emmett

Hallelujah

I'm heart broken, I'm not sure I can read anymore

She's a melodramatic dummy and I hope he finds someone new

i realize Bella had a traumatic experience but her whiny, he's gonna leave stuff is a bit annoying. She should just talk to him and not believe some quack doctor

Hmmm, I really hope they're jealous and lying

She forgave him awfully easily