You haven't discontinued this story, have you?

I love this chapter! 3

And by Hani.. I think you are meaning Honey or Hunny. That's the thing that is kinda confusing me.. Is that what you are meaning..?

IT HAS BEEN YEARS DON'T DO THIS TO US

I loved this chap. It was so cute! :3 I really liked the part where Kaoru was helping Whitney with her dancing and how she always looked at the floor. I liked it where you had Kaoru mentally say, "I'm getting a little jealous of the floor." Keep up the good work! Your a pretty good writer.

This is a nice chapter. I liked how you had your oc meet the host club, but how did Whitney even get from her comfy bed at home to on the couch of the host club room without waking up? A bit suspicious. Her parents must've injected some drugs into her or something. XD I also thought that Whitney fainting was just so cute. :3

Mon amie means my girlfriend or my acquaintance, and since the word after mon is feminine you are supposed to use ma (even if Tamaki is a boy it goes off of the word not the person speaking). If you wanted to say daughter it would be fille. ( I might be wrong about this, I've only taken one year so far, but we went over this a lot. I also think this is a good book too, so keep writing!)

Please post more! I love your book!

Oh please continue :) this story is so lovely

U should continue

I still think Whitney and Karou should have kiss :3

more? :

Love it update soon 3

Nice storyy ! ;'D

Update , please ? (';

interesting ideas