Really great! I can totally see that happening. POOR RAPH! SAINW fics are always great ones to do, but this one is exceptional. Not too weird, no character death(something i hate in all stories except the REALLY amazing ones), and hopeful.

Good perspective on the building of resistance. I started a similar story but never quite finished it.

I added this to the SAINW community.

Nice job! Loved the dialogue especially. (“Whatever...so what are ya doin’ here? Just out ta shoot things?” “Got some advice. Next time pick somethin’ that’s still alive.”)

There was a slight excess of exclamation points in the narrative IMHO, but other than that it's a great little fic. :)

Peace,

Elsie

Hey, Reb! Nice little story here. I liked the interaction between Angel and Raph. Good job.

ouchie, that was a rough story when it aired. poor Donny. Poor everybody in that one. great add on though. _ kinda like a 'what went on' before past Donny came into the picture. cool.

I thought it was cool! Interesting perspective on the reasons Raphael might have had for going solo during those long years Donny was gone, and great job portraying the scene!

-GreenPeace49

Wow - great story.

I've always thought it a shame that we never got to know what happened while Donny was away in depth. Hm...is that a story I feel coming on? Perhaps if I lay out some plot-carrots, I might catch a plot-bunny or two.

Your loyal reader, Tanya. :D

I liked it! It's been ages since I've seen anything in the SAINW-verse!

And it involved Raph! I am SO onboard that train!