aww it was so sweet :3 somehow the beginning reminded me of that song.."it was early mornin' yesterday...i was up before the dawnnnnn"

nice

don't freak out it is cute. :)

Well I like it :) Its short and sweet yet conveys so much of what their relationship is about :)

That was good but YOU NEED MORE STORIES!

That was absolutely adorable, in its own way. Less appreciated than it should be. I mean, its a special moment that shows plenty of Kyoru, if one looks into it.

~Yasu