Reviews for Cinderella's Valentine
KnightLawn chapter 1 . 10/19/2017
This was really good I liked it.
Azamiko chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
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Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
*sigh. Finally, Arnold! I'm always relieved when he does the thinking himself! Hahahah! Great job!
LunarianPrincess chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
i pretty much adore this. and i love that helga is helga...lol and she doesn't need anyone to rescue her...not even football head
Kimmiko T chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I love this story!

Thanx!
mistique-serenity chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
"He could be in love with all personas she had taken on from Cecile all the way to deep throat"

Ok, in the movie, Helga's alter ego was Deep Voice, not throat... And I thought that was a pretty funny typo, since deep throat means something else, know what I'm saying? (Use Google if you don't).

"but with you it's defferent."

Typo. It's spelled different.

In rest, this is one of my favourite HA Valentine's Day stories. Just be careful with the grammar next time.
One Lonely Marauder chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
... I'm doomed to never get to bed before the sun comes up... Friday it was 5:30, Saturday it was six.. Sunday it was 6:30... gah..

You.. this is the MOST ADORABLE freaking thing I've ever read. I'm glad Arnold came out of his daftness! Oh joy... *faints*

Now... this time I will sleep, I swear to it... *glances over her shoulder at her bed* ... I should... *sneaks back to stories*
emily bradit chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
It was EVER so sweet xD
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Aw, very cute one! Great job on Helga's thoughts and with the conversation.

Keep the good writing.
Hellerick Ferlibay chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I have to agree with the rest - that it was too simple, short, and predictable; and of course that it was cute.
CarlinJ83 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
aww how sweet.
Pointy Objects chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Cute, cute cute. I do kind of like V-Day fics, although I'd like to read a really twisted one. But, I'm ina fandom filled with mushy, mushy romance loveers, so I take what I can get and I enjoy it.

"Helga didn’t even like fairy tales. Weak and frail girls waiting for a wonderful prince to save them. Well not Belle. Mulan either. And Ariel, depending on how you wanted to look at it. But not Pocahontas. She ditched John Smith for-"

Absolute brilliance. You're great.

-Pointy_Objects
Pyrex Shards chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
I think you should write more chaptered HA fanfics. The homecoming idea, Arnold walking Helga to class (and her obliviousness to his intentions), would all be perfect ways to start a much longer HxA pairing story. Nevertheless, the kiss in the end was pretty romantic.
jadeykins chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Aw that was really sweet. Great job! :)
MOCHS chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Cute story but I think I found a name typo in the last sentence.

"Before she could say anything else, Helga silenced her with a kiss."

You mean Arnold silence her with a kiss, right? And I think it's the FTI, not FIT building.

I could tell you were rushing but it's still good. Please correct the typos?
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