| Reviews for The Change You Want to See |
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   Atlantima chapter 1 . 11/6/2011 Good story. A couple of grammar errors: "They'll be other boys." - should be "There'll be" "Bobby Reynolds and I going to go out now." - should be "ARE going to go out now." |
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2009 thoroughly enjoyed that |
| zeusfluff chapter 1 . 2/16/2009 I liked the way you wrote this story, it was well written. I don't really have anything to say about grammar, you hit it right on the mark. Again, thanks for sharing a great story! ~zeusfluff~ |
