This makes sense... in the most nonsensical kind of way. Loved it.

Absolutely brilliant! I wish this was 10,000 words so I could read it for hours and hours. A job incredibly well done! I tip my hat to you.

Yes! I'm not the only who sees somnething between Cook and J.J.!(and I only watched the 2nd episode so far, too! XD)

That was amazing - and you totally captured JJ's voice. Bless him. Fabulous writing there. (:

this is just so pretty, man. so in character and told like, you just know cook would smile and fuck and act like it's no big deal and jj would be all cutely confused and strangely comfortable -used- to it all. i love this. you're a great writer. thank you.

Omg, you have no idea how much i love this. :)

Write more.

Pleasse Dude :)

Oh wow. I love how you just sort of jumped into JJ's fragmented mindest. And how cook's all...dirty I guess. Its really good. I also rather surprisingly like the pairing...it works in an odd sort of way. Yeah, this is really good. *grins* thankies ]