and that last sentence—at least the similarity of the force when at baratie he forced zoro and usopp to go after her—fueled us lunami shippers' hearts!

well, this moved my heart sooo much!
thank you, a wonderful story.

Oooooh c'était tellement mignon ... c'est vrai que Luffy a vraiment une putain de famille quand même hahaha !

nice

Love it. It starts really solemn, and then it slowly gravitates to and becomes something lighter, that is sorta hinted LuNa yet at the same time really not.

Seriously, though. What is up with that twisted family?

the greatness of this, I can't take it omg

This is literally my favorite one piece fanfiction on this entire site. Definitely in my list of top five fanfictions ever, and that's saying something.

Every six months or so, I find myself coming back to this story to reread it... and each time having to spend about 20 minutes trying to track it down. No more, I am favoriting it.

...But seriously, you portray the character emotions so well in this story. It is completely believable, and addresses an obvious issue that the manga never addressed. It doesn't feel like filler, it feels like something that should actually be in the manga to develop the characters more.

... well, see ya later. I'll be back to this story in about six months or so, most likely.

I found this to be very sweet, and I'm really loving how you write!

wow. not bad. you did pretty well.

Sanji's right! I bet Luffy would make girl's head turn... Hahaha

I mean, what with him being so frank... but clueless... he'd say some things he thinks is 'nice' but means heavier for a girl! *giggles*

So cute. :D

Nice. I really like it! You know what I think would go well with a story like this? A story about how Nami would react (considering her past) if Luffy ever decided to commit /real/ acts of piracy. Nothing major, just robbing people on ships and in towns blind while wearing that big stupid grin of his, or something like that.

aw happy ending. good old luffy he might be hella dangerous but you can always count on him to look out for nami. oh yeah and those other guys too.

I loved this fiction. After the Post Enies arc, I would not doubt that all the crewmembers would doubt exactly who their captain is.

Especially Nami, the one who is closest to Luffy! How you portrayed her feelings of unsure, with fear, was great. I would have preferred that her apology scene would have been a few paragraphs longer, or that there was a bit more LuffyxNami, but you still did a fine job here. Very nice.

At first, I was all Nami thinks Luffy is dangerous? Duh, he's dangerous! He has the strength of a monster! But when you pointed out that the rest of his family are monstrous people as well a light bulb went off in my head. I had never thought about it before but he really does come from a special line and it's kinda strange. I don't think there was ever a real chance of Nami just deciding to leave even if she was a little spooked. They've been through too much together. Great story.