Is this part of a larger story? It seems like it could be.

It's good that they swear. Cursing just seems to demonstrate Darcy really well. Austen shoud have made him a sailor. Geddit, he's a dreamboat? [Awkward silence] Liked it!

Ah, LOVED this oneshot! I really wish that this was an actually story! your writing style is awesome! I thought you did a great job with the descriptions.

I LOVE this. I have read the book, and I was very happy that you were able to keep their basic character without losing it in an alternate universe and a different time with different customs.

P.S.

Please continue Diary, Oh Diary. I have had cravings to read it more, it was so good. Plus, when Jenny first entered the proximity of Warren and had such a strong reaction, was it because he was so attracted to her from the very beginning?

This is brilliant! I adore Pride and Prejudice, and modern AU's just fill me with glee and send me skipping like a fawn through tulips.

Oh my God, where did my brain go just now?

This is a cool story. I enjoyed it.

That was very...good.

Sorry, couldn't help it. Liked it a lot!

toothaches & cavities come with the Austen territory, & maybe neural implsions are a good thing? :) last bit is nothing resembleing cannon, even for an AU...which I guess is to say implausible...but it's Lizzie&Darcy so who cares?

Once again, wow.

Oh the squishy fluff... but I thought the modernizing of it was fun...

please, please, pleas continue! they are too cute...(and will too hot, but shush)

I'm thinking Darcy's theory about his hand fitting perfectly was proven correct. *g*

Brilliant story. I like the one-shot approach and that this is a modern retelling without being horribly cliched.

That was simply adorable. A genius combination that I wish could be extended... ? You have an excellent handle on language, I must say, and portrayed Mr. Darcy better then many other P&P fanfiction writers. I had my moment of girlish giggle and enjoyed it. Wonderfully entertaining!

aw. so sweet.

i thought u captured the whole lizzie/darcy thing very well. but i think that charlie would be a bit more grumpy towards

darcy, especially if he's drunk. is he drunk?

also, loved the reference to the whole deer in caught in headlights cliche. u mocked it so well.

I loved this!

And yes, it was indeed very nice to see an AU fic that didn't involve Starbucks. :)