Reviews for Candle |
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![]() ![]() This was beautiful, love all Derek's inner thoughts and how the family all had their little suspicians about them but mostly I love how deliriously happy Dasey were throughout the story. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! It was wonderful. |
![]() ![]() this is sooo sweet. I like your writing and also how fluffy this is |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really feel good sort of story and that's rare since there aren't that many dasey stories with so little angst but anyways while I do enjoy angst what I'm saying is this is pretty great and not disappointing at all :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() actually i liked how you wrote Derek's POV |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I wanna marry this story. I also want to read them coming out to their parents :) Thanks for the story. Adorable. It pulls at all the right heartstrings :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I would've thought it impossible to have a GOOD story where nothing went wrong, but *voila* you proved me wrong, didn't you! I loved the Derek-characterization, you managed a pretty darn amazing feat and made him in-character even though he's in love. And both the chapters were cute, but they had a lot of depth too! (And you're a Jacob fan! Yep, love you already. But seriously the world NEEDS more Jacob love! There are a lot of good Daseys out there, really. Some mightn't be so good, but this fandom has some of the BEST stories I've EVER read.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, they're so happy! That was absolutely adorable. I love how they were pretending to be upset that they had to share an apartment but inside they were like, "YEA!" Awesome, awesome, awesome. Thank you for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shut up. The second chapter was so NOT a disappointment! I love it. This might be my favourite one of them. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() 10 stars! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nope, that was not disappointing in the least:):) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! This was lovely! I wish they'd ended the show like this! Loved the ending line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unbelievebly Awesome, I really liked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice update. Keep up the good work! |