Thanks. A lot of fun.

Really enjoyed this story. Well written, well paced, original and good new characters. Thanks for sharing.

One of the best Chuck stories out there in my opinion, hands down. Hope some day you come back and give us a sequel.

This may be late, but this was one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. You perfectly capture the characters and show. Great work to you and your beta readers!

I really, really like this story. I had to read it again!

Nice plot twist.

Well written.
You have a riveting plot, the existing characters are true to self. Your OCs are sound and the chinchillas provide nice comic counterpoint. An ex-Mossad agent as Buy More CEO is stretching things a bit, but grousing about reality in a story with an Intersect in it is probably a bit nitpicky.

Hope you kept writing

A very enjoyable story, even after all this time.

A fun story, and an AU with a lot of potential. I was wondering how you were going to get Chuck and Sarah out of the caught-them-kissing hole, but you did a great job. Sarah was seriously off her game when al Fayed caught her, but between the blood loss and the emotional rollercoaster ride that Chuck was putting her through, that development was just barely plausible. :) Oh, and it was nice to see Twin Oaks show up again.

A fun ride, thank you!

Great job with the Rachel conversation, and I particularly enjoyed the bit where she encouraged Sarah to hold on to Chuck and to trust God. Beautifully done! You made me smile and ache and love them all. Everyone is so in-character!

You also have a talent for ending your chapters on engaging cliffhangers, so nice job there. :) Your story is pulling me along, and I always regret it when I have to stop reading and return to the business of life!

Great story. I liked it.

Wow! What a fun story! I wish this had happened instead of season three! It's sad that you stopped writing Chuck stories five years ago but thanks for the stories that you did write! We would love to read more from you!

Wow this was a fun story to read and am glad you took the time to write such a story with a unique plot. Honestly this is one of the only stories on this site where I could imagine actually being a couple episodes for the series. To tell the truth it is sad they never did anything with Buymore Boss besides mentioning him.

This would have been awesome if something like this happened in the tv series. Well written action and emotional chapter.

Really great Chuck/Sarah interaction in this chapter.