I actually think that this was wonderfully done. Great, great work. Though I loved the actual chapter, this was a great prediction of things to come. Oh, how I would have loved it if this had occurred!

Awesome! I would have loved for the actual chapter to have turned out like this! I mean, this is brilliant. From the poem to the "QUEEN" part, I was hooked onto every word.

Go turn it into a story!

Oh god, I loved it. 3

Grammatical error at the part on page four to five.

"Didn't I -"

" - already - "

" - told you - "

" - it's over. "

Technically, it should be "Didn't I already TELL you it's over?"

You put a bit of periods in the place of question marks. I would recommend looking that over. c:

Other than that, very good story. Tells it like a manga. c:

~Train

OMG! Continue! PLEASE! FRANKLY I THINK THIS IS BETTER THAN THE MANGA ITSELF! Please o please continue it!

Hehehe u got the title right!...but I like how ur mind works...Ur idea's way better than Kubo's updated manga...When I first took a glimpse on the latest chapter I go "OMG! I think sirius is a psychic!" but then as I read the following pages, my shoulders slumped, go see for urself why...I mean c'mon! Inoue and Ishida on a page again!I've been waiting for Rukia's splendid entrance or something!BTW, I also reviewed on this fic before...only I wasn't able to log in...hehehe

This is so good! Please continue!

I love it! You are really good. The poem at the beginning was great and the way you describe the scene it's really like reading the manga. You painted a clear image of what was happening. I love if the real chapter turn out to be something similar to yours. Pleas continue this as a story! You have great talent! Again I simply love it!

PLEASE MAKE IT INTO A STORY!

awesome fic! I cant wait for teh next update

This was quite good! Very interesting style. I would like to see this continued.

Make it a regular story! I beg of you! Do it!

I squee'd when Ogihci showed up. Write more chapters, please! o.o

It'd be so cool if this actually happened. Try for next week as well. I like your idea

Are you psychic?I hope so!XD

Do write more!

Love it!

OMG!OMG!OMG!

I love this! Please update asap.

One quick surrgestion, watch your tense in the story.

Other than that it was excellent.

I really like the decriptions of Ulquiorra.

Update soon!